Blood War

[rnsprivateeye]

The land has been torn apart into 4 seperate kingdoms. Their names are: Karia, Lokoria, kithina, and Blackoria. Karia is the Water Kingdom. Their continent is on a large island surronded by water. Lokoria is the Earth nation. It is located on a tall mountain to The North of the Karia nation. Kithina is the air nation. It literally floats in the air above the entire land. And Blackoria the Fire kingdom. It is surronded by large, inactive volcanoes. These four nations are all at war. They each have their own unique weapons and animals that they use.

Nations
Karia
Lokoria
Kithina
Blackoria

You don't need to fill out a character sheet. Just say what your name is and what nation you are from.

[Nickodemus]

private eye. you gotta come up with some motivation for getting people to join a little more. some plot device or something. like what we might do? even that much. why dont you play a few more RP's maybe even join up in mine. Colony one. I need one more person. Just try to learn from your last couple and don't god-mod.. the idea is to have fun. You dont have to win all the time. and weaknesses in your character ( at least in mine. which they have all had some.) can be fun...

[GrassDragon]

You haven't really completed the initial post for this RP. What are the specialized weapons/animals for each nation? What's the genre/time period? Are there any special races? Tell us about the history of the world. Why are they fighting? What caused the nations to split? Why have they aligned themselves with the elements?

You have a setting (not very well developed though), but no characters or plot.

[Ragnarox]

msprivateeye you need to be more detailed when creating an RP. Although you have mentioned a vauge outline of the RP, there are some points I would like to make.

1) Although RP'ers tend to be very creative when manifesting battles and cities and what not, we can't do so when we don't know how far each civilization has spread over the course of the war.

2) Are there unaligned city states or tribes?

3) When you say "no need for a character sheet" I am assuming you have the detailed information that we will use in our character development. If this is not the case you must specify otherwise.

4) You have to make the RP more catchy, if I didn't know otherwise I would call this RP bland, boring and lacking structure.