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LXM-Designs
02-08-2004, 2:42 PM
http://members.chello.nl/j.cuijpers3/misc/artwork.jpg

Here it is, I know it sucks, but it's one of my first renders with Cinema 4d. I am kinda satisfied with the final result though it's not perfect or something.
Anyone willing to give me some c&c? It would be apreciated :)
Dark_Soul74
02-08-2004, 2:52 PM
Pretty good, if I say so myself. Which I did saay myself. Now I'm confusing myself.
Ark-templarius
02-08-2004, 2:59 PM
Is that supposed to be "live" of "life"?
WeekendLazyness
02-08-2004, 3:00 PM
I like it. It's better than anything I could make.
SunTzu
02-08-2004, 3:03 PM
Wow thats nice.

Except for that typo Tenshi pointed out. :P
Luther-Stark
02-08-2004, 3:11 PM
Its not that bad. WOrk on the clarity and sharpness. Till then,

!~Cheers.
Fenguin
02-08-2004, 3:49 PM
Wow, your definition of "sucks" must be waay different than mine. Omg that is AWESOME.
dunchy
02-08-2004, 4:03 PM
Very, very good for a layout, my compliments.
UndeadBastard
02-08-2004, 5:03 PM
Nice one Luuk, teach me cinema4d!
DraconicFiend
02-08-2004, 7:27 PM
Vury nice LuuK
Akule
02-08-2004, 11:10 PM
Its ok... i mean its nothing special, and its been done before.
Swiftjustice
02-09-2004, 2:02 AM
looks great soo far.... I likes
LXM-Designs
02-09-2004, 8:11 AM
Wow thanks! I got better comments here then anywhere else ^^

Shini, yeah you're right, my English isn't perfect (yet?). Thanks for pointing that out.
Sfinx
02-09-2004, 9:39 AM
Btw thanks for sending it to me, I'm workin' on something cool right now :p

It's not bad imo, I'll give some c&c when I have more time.
LXM-Designs
02-10-2004, 6:56 AM
Hehehe NP, I'm working an a new one as we speak.
d00d
02-10-2004, 9:23 AM
1337, why isn't it on tsl? =P
LXM-Designs
02-10-2004, 10:19 AM
It is .... http://www.thesouthernlegacy.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=395
Eros
02-10-2004, 6:43 PM
It's nice, but the swirls on the top and bottom don't seem to go with the general flow of the rest of the piece.

The render is good, keep it up!
BlackHawk
02-10-2004, 6:54 PM
The 2D is fantastic, GJ on that. I like the bottom of the render (under the lighting) but the top is sorta...I dunno plain with just the random spikes. But it's still better then what I could do (I don't even have a 3D rendering program). And the 2D interface stuff isn't bad either.

Overall, GJ.
OboeGuru
02-10-2004, 6:57 PM
O.O Wow. Is that the Michelangelo "perfect man" in the middle of the flare? :D

I wish I could do stuff like that. Must... find... your... program... *gasp* ;)
d00d
02-11-2004, 5:13 AM
O.O Wow. Is that the Michelangelo "perfect man" in the middle of the flare? :D

What? o_0
LXM-Designs
02-11-2004, 7:24 AM
Yes it is in the middle, take a good look d00d ;)
Oboe, it's just cinema 4d, you can get it from kazaa.
CODEZERO
11-12-2004, 3:46 PM
i can't see it me want to see me want to see.......
it says this page cannot be found on IE
and then on mozilla it say Not Found
The requested URL /j.cuijpers3/misc/artwork.jpg was not found on this server.
WeekendLazyness
11-12-2004, 6:57 PM
That's probably becuase he deleted it. It has been nine months.
Fenguin
11-12-2004, 8:02 PM
The thread suddenly contracted ebola and died of massive hemorrhaging.