View Full Version : I wrote a Song!
Protosschick99
08-27-2004, 10:55 PM
Actually, I've written lots of songs--But I choose to share this one with ya'llz. Nissa inspired me to share it, lolz :P
Can It Be?
Oh Father God, can it be?
Is he really the one for me?
I know that I promised you a single life
And I intend to keep that because I made a covenant
We've got so much in common
We are so alike
But he still has a lot to learn in his faith life
If he is the one I know what you'll say
"Don't worry children, you'll be married one day."
I wish I could find out right now tonight
But You and I both know it wouldn't be right
It's too soon to know, I'm only 18!
I still have to experience the world and believe!
Believe that You'll keep Your word and send the right one
Believe that he'll be awesome and fun
Believe that he is the one called to be
My husband and friend undoubtedly
I can't really fight what I feel
It's too hard to push it away without being real
I want to say everything that is on my mind
But, I know that that it will take time
If this relationship is truly meant to be
Then God will bring us together at the appointed time being
I'll be ready if it is true
And I hope that you will be too
I've waited so long and so have you
I'm praying and hoping that this will be true...
I wrote another one dedicated to my future husband too ;) All these songs are gonna get music written for it and they are gonna be recorded with my band :D
*Tear* That's beautiful. I wish I had something to post other than that, but that's just beautiful. Who's the lucky guy, Gracie?
~Larry "Geno" Meyers
Protosschick99
08-27-2004, 11:01 PM
Thanks Geno :) That means a lot :P
And--It's for the guy I like :D
And that guy is...? You haven't told us yet! C'mon! I won't tell! Honest :p
~Larry "Geno" Meyers
ZeroDarkStar
08-27-2004, 11:17 PM
And you're the one to tell us to lay off...:P
Hopin' it'll be you? ^_^
And you're the one to tell us to lay off...:P
Hopin' it'll be you? ^_^
<.<
>.>
o.o
Uh... No...? Help... I uh... Have some... Uh... Stuff to do. Yea, stuff! I need to go, kthxbye
~Larry "Whooosh Geno" Meyers
ZeroDarkStar
08-27-2004, 11:20 PM
Yeah, keep runnin'! We'll see how far you get!
Protosschick99
08-27-2004, 11:36 PM
Well, as for the guy I like--He's so much like me it's scary...o.0
We are of the same faith, We like the same video games, the same music, the same clothing (Not as in, we both wear girl clothes or guy clothes, lolz--I like his style cuz it's cool :D), we both are involved in music, we both write, we both have the urge to be independant, we both like to talk, we both think the same things, we'll go to the same place on the same day and trip out when we find out about it, lolz :D
It's so wierd it's scary, lolz. Anywayz, his name is Lawerence :D (I think that's how you spell it, lolz)
Frattimonde
08-28-2004, 4:08 AM
Itīs good If you like songs with "tunes of light".
Although I like more darker songs.
Hmm, perhaps you could make the song even better If
you gave It, a more poetic touch?
BTW: Hereīs a dark song lyrics, as an example of the songs I like.
A song named "Horncrowned Majesty", by "Naglfar".
Just click the link.
http://www.darklyrics.com/lyrics/naglfar/diabolical.html#1
TranquilNightElf
08-28-2004, 4:18 AM
Nice song Gracie :)..Who's that guy nehoo?..(yeah yeah I'm prying :P lol)
Anychance you'll sing it into an mp3?..speaking of which how about that precussion audio file and your trip photos?
Protosschick99
08-28-2004, 4:24 AM
Omg those words are refering to pagan Gods.....Ummm...I choose to use my gift to Praise God or write concerning God in my life. :)
Here's one I wrote for my future husband like I said :D I still don't have a title for it. I'm thinking of calling it, "Wait, It's not too Late","Enduring Time" or "Hold On & Wait". Anywayz, here it is!!
Wait for me, like I'm waiting for you
It's the best thing both of us can do
God knows when the time is right
His timing is in perfect light
Hold on love
We're almost there
Our lives will soon be together to share
Wait for me sweetie
Have the patience to endure
God will bring us together down the road for sure
Right now focus on God
Time with Him is precious in full
I pray for you constantly in the Holy Spirit
I call your life prosperous, peaceful, and blessed
In Jesus name I rebuke all obstacles in your life
I also rebuke all anger and strife
You have the divine right to be well
As a tither and a giver, which I know you are....
It was prophesied to me that you would be unique
That is something that I do not take lightly
I await the day when we meet face to face
It'll be worth it when we first embrace
Our match will be pleasing in God's eyes
We shall be fruitful and multiply
Our marriage will be what God wanted it to be
Full of love and happy
Hold on and wait
It's not too late...
If ya'llz are wondering, I don't write love songs all the time, lolz. Those two are the only ones I have. Everything else is basically to Praise God, worship Him, deliver ppl, prophesy to peeps, or preach the Word! :D :)
Nice song Gracie :)..Who's that guy nehoo?..(yeah yeah I'm prying :P lol)
Anychance you'll sing it into an mp3?..speaking of which how about that precussion audio file and your trip photos?
As soon as I get this really awesome recorder that I wanna buy--You'll be able to hear me play :D And as soon as I install the drivers for my camera on my computer--Then you'll get to see my pics :D lolz.
And like I said, the guy's name is Lawerence :P
TranquilNightElf
08-28-2004, 4:25 AM
Cool :D ..I'd really want to hear how this would be put to music.. should sound excellent.
I'd give you karma but i've given out too much in the past 24 hours.
Protosschick99
08-28-2004, 4:26 AM
Man the melody to this one above your post is beautiful!! I wrote it as I was getting my hair done in the salon, lolz :P It almost made me cry :)
Frattimonde
08-28-2004, 4:37 AM
Man the melody to this one above your post is beautiful!! I wrote it as I was getting my hair done in the salon, lolz :P It almost made me cry :) Hmm, If you donīt mind me asking.
Have you ever made a "sad poem"?
Kinda a little likes this one,
http://www.warboards.org/showthread.php?t=1927 (http://www.warboards.org/showthread.php?t=1827)
My only, "undiabolic" poem.
The name of It Is, "Thy Tears".
Protosschick99
08-28-2004, 4:43 AM
That's beautiful too! But sad :( I choose to stay away from negative thoughts and negative things, because all it brings out of me is negative stuff. I don't need to be around things like that with the kind of life that I live.
I'm not knock'n ya at all Fratt, you are very cool :) It's just not my style. I prefer to use my gift for Jesus! :D Such as this:
Jesus My Best Friend
I
You're the only one that has been there for me
You're the only one who has heard my every plea
You're the only one who knows me
You're the one one who's future of mine can see
II
No one understands me like you do
No one blesses me like you do
No one has always been so true
Which is why I love you like I do
CHORUS
Jesus--It's you
It's so so true
You are my bestfriend and will always be
No matter what happens, you'll never leave me
III
You'll always be there for me
You'll never let me down
You won't gossip or lie
Or spread rumours aobut me and my life
I'll depend on you for the rest of my life
I'll serve you lovingly with all my heart
In your presence is where I want to be
Because I know that you'll always love me
Frattimonde
08-28-2004, 4:48 AM
Why thanks.
Say, do you like any "light metal bands"?
Thereīs a really good Swedish metal band named "Hammerfall".
I think you would like It, since Itīs not so dark.
Itīs more beautiful metal, (light Power Metal).
Hereīs a link to their website.
http://www.hammerfall.net
ShadowGonissa
08-28-2004, 12:33 PM
Aw, PC's stuff is fuzzy. Don't be all bugging her to do sad stuff. I got that taken care of.
Protosschick99
08-29-2004, 2:47 AM
lolz :D I luv ya Nissa homie :)
Well, today my homie Darlene and I wrote the melody to a song that I wrote called "Live Right!" The LORD soooo gave me those words! Here it is:
Live Right!
You call yourself a Christian but you don't go to church
You say you know God but you don't tithe, give, or bless others
You tell others not to gossip
But there you are gossiping yourself
All you are is a hypocrite
You preach one thing and practice another
Don't you realize that God is watching from above?
And you wonder why you haven't been blessed
Obviously it's because you don't live the Christian life
Stop worrying about the outside
Take a look on the inside
What's in your heart that needs to be fixed?
This is one of the reasons why Jesus sent the Holy Spirit
He is our councellor and can help us overcome
The things in the natural that we can't get done
Get in the Word and practice the life
The life a Christian should be living day and night
Don't worry about others
Worry about yourself
And how you should be living in God's covenant
You say you know scripture but you don't read the Word
You claim you know God but there you are cursing and flipping off others
Is that really the way to show the love of Christ?
I think not--Stop tripp'n and live right
A Christian walks with God and goes to church
They honor God with their tithe and bless others
A Christian doesn't gossip and puts on the love of Christ
Now here's what you need to do:
LIVE RIGHT!
I wrote this song in like 5-10 minutes. Anywayz, Darlene and I came up with a melody today! It's so awesome cuz it completely matches what I wrote. We haven't had to change anything around.
Oh! And we also started writing a melody for "Can It Be?"--Omg it's so beautiful!! Darlene really knows how to sing stuff beautifully :)
Ole-The-Murder
08-29-2004, 6:00 PM
OOOOH, I just love your lyrics, PC! Whould you mind if I borrowed those and printed them out to ejaculate? I mean of course, share them with the family..perhaps sing them aloud on guitar...I'd break their hearts! Perhaps sing them for christmas and we'd eat cookies and have a merry time! Wish I never had this awful nick, but I cannot change it now :cry:
OOOOH, I just love your lyrics, PC! Whould you mind if I borrowed those and printed them out to ejaculate? I mean of course, share them with the family..perhaps sing them aloud on guitar...I'd break their hearts! Perhaps sing them for christmas and we'd eat cookies and have a merry time! Wish I never had this awful nick, but I cannot change it now :cry:
That's just... Disturbing... Uh... Wow, strange change of heart...
Oh, and welcome back. It's been rather quiet on WB lately...
~Larry "Geno" Meyers
Valjean
08-29-2004, 7:08 PM
Whoa...what happened to Ole? O_o
Protosschick99
08-29-2004, 8:02 PM
OOOOH, I just love your lyrics, PC! Whould you mind if I borrowed those and printed them out to ejaculate? I mean of course, share them with the family..perhaps sing them aloud on guitar...I'd break their hearts! Perhaps sing them for christmas and we'd eat cookies and have a merry time! Wish I never had this awful nick, but I cannot change it now :cry:
I'm gonna let the second comment slide....Afterall--You are being nice now.....Which is....ummm....freaky. lolz :P
Welcome to the light side Ole! *hugz* :D :)
BSTRhino
08-29-2004, 9:50 PM
Go Ole! lol
chibi
08-29-2004, 10:04 PM
I really love both your songs Gracie! They are really pretty. I've always wanted to write songs but I can't write music to them. Oh well.
Way to Go!
Protosschick99
08-29-2004, 10:08 PM
Thanks!
Btw, you can still write songs--Just find someone who can write music for them! :D All thatI do is think up melodies in my head and BOOM! I got a song, lolz :P
Ole-The-Murder
08-30-2004, 12:25 PM
Whould you mind if I added some lyrics to this page?
If you don't want these displayed, just drop me line;
Oh, hurray, this glorious day!
A picnic in a meadow field....
Hush, we brush away all atrocities, heathens and gay!
We are happy and gay, for our faith shall shield!
Dance in a ring of flowers and I have no fear!
The health care is rather bad and so is the welfare,
But it don't matter, we shall help the unfortunate with our helping gear!
So don't glare because the truth of Jesus Christ is bare!"
LIKE IT!? :D
Protosschick99
08-30-2004, 1:35 PM
First of all--If you had any concept of the word--You never would have wrote this song.
It doesn't do anything to support the gospel--All you are doing is mocking God :(
Stop trying to act Christian, I know you're not. Nice try at this song though :p
Ole-The-Murder
08-31-2004, 10:59 AM
Even if the attempt wasn't most succsessfull, the faith behind it was full-hearted and I atleast tried! Please don't be so rude and knock me off... :(
Frattimonde
08-31-2004, 11:13 AM
Even if the attempt wasn't most succsessfull, the faith behind it was full-hearted and I atleast tried! Please don't be so rude and knock me off... :( Youīre just trying to get attention with your spam.
Just post songs In your own thread, and "not" someone elses.
And I agree with PC, youīre just acting.
Ole-The-Murder
08-31-2004, 5:13 PM
...Not anymore, tho ;)
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