My first comic

[bluemicrobyte]

http://home.earthlink.net/~bluemicrobyte/comic1.JPG

I would like to start an open critique of my first ever comic......really its the first one I ever did in my life.....that I can remember... yes I know thats sad

This comic was based on the time AJ left for his near death trip, and I came up with a cheesy story on how schwitzer torchered us as he reigned over warboards. DISCLAIMER: none of this ever happened, schitzer cannot hold this against me

(I post this here because no one saw it in the warboards art thread that is now apparently dead)

[Valjean]

Hmmm....good for afirst comic, but you need ome improvment. =/

I don't know what's up with AJ or why the Members are floating heads. =/

Also, don't use Schwitzer's avatar, make a character in MS Paint. His Avatar looks kinda out-of-place in the comic. And then all the members turn from small black circles to larger dead smileys. O_o

All in all, I give it:

6.5/10

[XTERMIN8OR1]

I would like to start an open critique of my first ever comic......really its the first one I ever did in my life.....that I can remember... yes I know thats sadI never made any real comics too. A few tries, but they all sucked big time. My art skills are awfull. But, your comic is quite funny.

[Battlecruiser]

Yeha, I have to say it is pretty funny, though I could have predicted what was going to happen. Nice job though.

[quadguy86]

pretty cool

[bluemicrobyte]

Yeha, I have to say it is pretty funny, though I could have predicted what was going to happen. Nice job though.why, just caus I started rumors long ago that schwitzer was evil while AJ was gone? or just caus I'm like that...

Hmmm....good for afirst comic, but you need ome improvment. =/

I don't know what's up with AJ or why the Members are floating heads. =/

Also, don't use Schwitzer's avatar, make a character in MS Paint. His Avatar looks kinda out-of-place in the comic. And then all the members turn from small black circles to larger dead smileys. O_o

All in all, I give it:

6.5/10well at least is was between 1 and 4, which was what I was expecting..

The reason for the low quality was because I wasn't sure if this was a worthwhile comic, so I didin't spend a LOT of time on it, though I did spen 20 minutes maybe on it.

BEHOLD

(I've always wanted to do that :) )

my SECOND comic!!! w00t (I know its not that great either :( )

http://home.earthlink.net/~bluemicrobyte/comic2.JPG

THE NOTECARD READS:

notice from AJ
do NOT push
the button

[Moser]

Is fenguin high? His eyes look a little... bloodshot.

[Battlecruiser]

Is fenguin high? His eyes look a little... bloodshot.
Yeah, that is one of the effects from too much Qoo.

[bluemicrobyte]

Is fenguin high? His eyes look a little... bloodshot.fenguin is trying VERY hard to resist the button, which clearly says "DO NOT PUSH" and we all know fenguin loves buttons..........right?

perhaps if the button were a lever and the sign said "DO NOT HUMP" this would be beter?

[Moser]

Yeah, that is one of the effects from too much Qoo.
What exactly is Qoo? O.o

[ZeroDarkStar]

Is it just me, or does Fenguin look sorta blurry?

[bluemicrobyte]

Is it just me, or does Fenguin look sorta blurry?Hes shaking, especially his arm, it wants to push the button...

[ZeroDarkStar]

And what's that thing that says WarBoards?

[Moser]

looks like an appartment complex to me.. or a very large server??

[bluemicrobyte]

looks like an appartment complex to me.. or a very large server??its the warboards headquarters where AJ's office resides, federal regulations require a self destruction button to be placed on every forum office ubilding.......but we could call it a giant server.....

[Chiron]

The fact that you have to explain your comic does not bode well. It's still kinda funny though

[bluemicrobyte]

i realize thats not a good thing....

@#$^#$@% WOW STRESS TEST?!?!? OPEN TO ANYONE???? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

/me rushes around the WOW site, VERY EXITEDLY

[Moser]

BMB, Here's a suggestion. Next time you make a comic look at it and if there is anything that looks odd then lable it. Sometimes I find that funny. But thats just my lame sence of humor.

[bluemicrobyte]

I'll try to label more stuff next time, and make it clearer....any ideas for a comic? (o wait nvm yer just gonna tell me to come up with my own)

[Moser]

You could always make one advirtising your spamming problem you posted earlier. :P

[bluemicrobyte]

OOO I like it!!!!

/me goes back to the comic maker..........well actally he goes off to diner, brb

[d00d]

Omfg, my eyes... >_<

[bluemicrobyte]

Omfg, my eyes... >_<right............never seen you around here before....

[Valjean]

Omfg, my eyes... >_<
OH MY GOD! THEY TURNED INTO UNFINISHED TRIANGLES!!

/me beats teh unfinished triangles with a broom

[bluemicrobyte]

OH MY GOD! THEY TURNED INTO UNFINISHED TRIANGLES!!

* Werewolf91 beats teh unfinished triangles with a broomwhat? what are you talkin about?!!!!!!!?!?!??!? and we dont have any brooms!!! only mops

[d00d]

right............never seen you around here before....

d00d: Member #177

bluemicrobyte: Member #3444

kthxbai.

[IceFlare]

lmfao haha d00d teh funnay =)

[Battlecruiser]

d00d: Member #177

bluemicrobyte: Member #3444

kthxbai.
Haha nice. Bluemicrobyte, sorry but you just got owned by D00d.

[hammocksleeper]

LOL! micro you put a moustache on Schwitzer, haha

[bluemicrobyte]

LOL! micro you put a moustache on Schwitzer, hahawhat the?...........

have I been away that long? caus none of the recent posts make any sense to me!

[Xx_bender_xX]

d00d: Member #177

bluemicrobyte: Member #3444

kthxbai.
hold on a tick

d00d is member#177 he only has 267 posts

bluemicrobyte is member #3444 and has 1501 posts!!:o

bluemicrobyte.......lay off the crack:D

[bluemicrobyte]

hold on a tick

d00d is member#177 he only has 267 posts

bluemicrobyte is member #3444 and has 1501 posts!!:o

bluemicrobyte.......lay off the crack:D...
/me goes hyper
/me turns insane
/me kills bender
MUAHAHAHHAHAHA

[Ole-The-Murder]

Ye evil, evil, spammer...
May the forces of good have pity on your soul,
if not...then else, ya bettah get prepared to get feh-ryeeed!

[d00d]

hold on a tick

d00d is member#177 he only has 267 posts

bluemicrobyte is member #3444 and has 1501 posts!!:o

bluemicrobyte.......lay off the crack:D

I don't like posting in n00b (http://www.warboards.org/member.php?u=3444)-infested (http://www.warboards.org/member.php?u=7270) forums.

Btw HELLO MEMBER #7270, WELCOME TO WARBOARDS.

[Xx_bender_xX]

lol sry bout that. you see bluemicrobyte is a good friend of mine outside of internet, I know where he lives >=). so basicaly i like to bug him any chance I get;) (and yes i know im a n00b to warboards)

[bluemicrobyte]

OK ENOUGH SPAM back on topic.................what is the topic anyways?

I beleive this thread had somethign to do with my comics......which I'm on break from due to the WoW stress test.

[Ole-The-Murder]

Why the name 'stress test' actually? Because you have to test WoW in stress/as fast as you can?
Tell me more.

[d00d]

I'd like to reply you, but now that you're banned I won't bother doing so.

kekeke.

[bluemicrobyte]

wow, hes banned AGAIN, well heres a reply anyways:

the stress test means that they are letting in WAY more people than their servers are designed to handle, aka: they are trying to crash the servers with an overload of players, causing major lag and crashes. the servers have already gone mad a few times

theres a therad in the WoW forum

[Killphill]

Wait when you get banned can you get unbanned? An why is Ole banned?

[Battlecruiser]

Wait when you get banned can you get unbanned? An why is Ole banned?
For your first question, yes they can. But Ole-the-murder is permanently banned. The chances of him being unbanned, are very close to 0. For your second question, I think Ole-The-Murder, was banned for spamming and flaming.

[bluemicrobyte]

ole has been banned and unbanned countless times..........or two at least

[Battlecruiser]

ole has been banned and unbanned countless times..........or two at least
You mean he has been banned 2 times, and unbanned once. Or so I remember.

[bluemicrobyte]

exactly