Starcraft78cwal
05-17-2008, 11:35 PM
Civilization Undone
The soldier quivered in complete and abject terror, gun wavering as he struggled to compose himself and point it towards the metal door.
"Johl! Keep that arm steady!" the commander, Jackal, hissed.
"I'm trying, sir..." Johl replied. Suddenly a loud bang sounded on the other side of the metal door, and it pushed outward, revealing a small crack. Claws tinted the color of blood jabbed their way through, and an unearthly wail rose from beyond the door. Johl froze, rigid. The rest of the hand, if you could call it such, thrust its way through. It was covered in a thick carapace, twisted, jagged, and rough. Johl fired off a few shots in pure panic, and one of them found its mark. It sunk into the creature's flesh, sizzling as it did so. The Lava Spark gun was designed to do just that. The creature on the other side let out a blood-curdling yowl. Something big slammed against the door, and it fell open. The creature crouched their, like a hunter surveying its prey. It had a rather elongated head, with small yellow slits for eyes, and a long thin mouth, with jagged teeth. It had no ears or nose, but it could obviously smell and hear. It had a long tail, with a thin bladed edge. This is what had knocked the door down. It stood on all fours, with long legs and a thick, rough body. He had never seen this strain of the alien before. It snarled, then leaped at Johl. Jackal watched in horror as the creatures claws ripped through Johl's skin like it was butter, and was too stunned to wipe the blood off his face. The creature whipped its head around, fixed its glaring yellow eyes on Jackal, and pounced.
Civilization Undone is a new RP idea of mine. It takes place in the future, around Starcraft in terms of technology. The planet has been invaded by a terrible alien race, known as the Metamalfin, an alien strain capable of spreading death and decay wherever it goes. Elite squads have been called in from neighboring planets to help combat the threat, more to keep it from spreading to their worlds than to help the poor people on this one. Jackal, my character, is from a squad that comes from the planet where all this is taking place, Talkin. You all come from the neighboring planets, arriving at the spaceport. The story will, of course, flesh out as we go along. CHARACTAH SHEET:
Name:
Age:
Primary Weapon: Remember, Starcraft era tech. I already mentioned one weapon, the Lava Spark. Use your imagination. Other possible weapon choices include the Z5 MileShot (sniper rifle with laser shots), Tomahawk ESG (rocket launcher-esq), and other weapons that you think of that fit the technology for this era.
Secondary Weapon: T-27 Minicannon (Like a pistol, but with way more force. Takes a good amount of time to reload), ZQ Grenade (Think of a photon blast), Shield Device, any other weapons that fit this era's tech.
Armor: Use your imagination...FAWK I could use some help on my character sheet...
Description:
Back story:
I realize my character sheet SUCKS, but please bear with me. What I'm trying to say about weapons is that make up your own, custom weapon, but make sure it fits with starcraft era tech. Same with army.
MY character:
Nickname: Jackal (Real name unknown)
Age: 21
Primary Weapon: Hyena (quick firing custom weapon that shoots burning, piercing bullets)
Secondary Weapon: HawkRife Longshot (Custom weapon that shoots lasers, takes a while to reload)
Armor: Nalidium Armor (Light armor, given to squad leaders, good protection)
Description: Tall, lean, black hair and humorous personality.
Back story: Jackal was trained to be a soldier all his life, and that training payed off as he became a squad leader. His squad was soon picked off one by one by the aliens, though, ripped to shreds. He was the only survivor, but how he survived is still a mystery.
This is a first time I've made an RP in a while, so any help with the character sheet especially would be appreciated if it's not to all yall's liking. :P Also, to those of you who are doubtful, I have a story planned out. I just can't reveal it. This isn't a storyless rp!
The soldier quivered in complete and abject terror, gun wavering as he struggled to compose himself and point it towards the metal door.
"Johl! Keep that arm steady!" the commander, Jackal, hissed.
"I'm trying, sir..." Johl replied. Suddenly a loud bang sounded on the other side of the metal door, and it pushed outward, revealing a small crack. Claws tinted the color of blood jabbed their way through, and an unearthly wail rose from beyond the door. Johl froze, rigid. The rest of the hand, if you could call it such, thrust its way through. It was covered in a thick carapace, twisted, jagged, and rough. Johl fired off a few shots in pure panic, and one of them found its mark. It sunk into the creature's flesh, sizzling as it did so. The Lava Spark gun was designed to do just that. The creature on the other side let out a blood-curdling yowl. Something big slammed against the door, and it fell open. The creature crouched their, like a hunter surveying its prey. It had a rather elongated head, with small yellow slits for eyes, and a long thin mouth, with jagged teeth. It had no ears or nose, but it could obviously smell and hear. It had a long tail, with a thin bladed edge. This is what had knocked the door down. It stood on all fours, with long legs and a thick, rough body. He had never seen this strain of the alien before. It snarled, then leaped at Johl. Jackal watched in horror as the creatures claws ripped through Johl's skin like it was butter, and was too stunned to wipe the blood off his face. The creature whipped its head around, fixed its glaring yellow eyes on Jackal, and pounced.
Civilization Undone is a new RP idea of mine. It takes place in the future, around Starcraft in terms of technology. The planet has been invaded by a terrible alien race, known as the Metamalfin, an alien strain capable of spreading death and decay wherever it goes. Elite squads have been called in from neighboring planets to help combat the threat, more to keep it from spreading to their worlds than to help the poor people on this one. Jackal, my character, is from a squad that comes from the planet where all this is taking place, Talkin. You all come from the neighboring planets, arriving at the spaceport. The story will, of course, flesh out as we go along. CHARACTAH SHEET:
Name:
Age:
Primary Weapon: Remember, Starcraft era tech. I already mentioned one weapon, the Lava Spark. Use your imagination. Other possible weapon choices include the Z5 MileShot (sniper rifle with laser shots), Tomahawk ESG (rocket launcher-esq), and other weapons that you think of that fit the technology for this era.
Secondary Weapon: T-27 Minicannon (Like a pistol, but with way more force. Takes a good amount of time to reload), ZQ Grenade (Think of a photon blast), Shield Device, any other weapons that fit this era's tech.
Armor: Use your imagination...FAWK I could use some help on my character sheet...
Description:
Back story:
I realize my character sheet SUCKS, but please bear with me. What I'm trying to say about weapons is that make up your own, custom weapon, but make sure it fits with starcraft era tech. Same with army.
MY character:
Nickname: Jackal (Real name unknown)
Age: 21
Primary Weapon: Hyena (quick firing custom weapon that shoots burning, piercing bullets)
Secondary Weapon: HawkRife Longshot (Custom weapon that shoots lasers, takes a while to reload)
Armor: Nalidium Armor (Light armor, given to squad leaders, good protection)
Description: Tall, lean, black hair and humorous personality.
Back story: Jackal was trained to be a soldier all his life, and that training payed off as he became a squad leader. His squad was soon picked off one by one by the aliens, though, ripped to shreds. He was the only survivor, but how he survived is still a mystery.
This is a first time I've made an RP in a while, so any help with the character sheet especially would be appreciated if it's not to all yall's liking. :P Also, to those of you who are doubtful, I have a story planned out. I just can't reveal it. This isn't a storyless rp!