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Rifleman223
04-15-2008, 1:51 PM
August 12, 2009

Dear Journal,

Today, the 108th Tactical Battalion was sent into the Hell of New York City to take care of this.... this enemy of some kind.
We Faced what has Looked like Demons..... I mean real Demons..... Like as if Hell has Froze over.... So Far We have Suffered Many Losses, around 45 Dead, 100 Injured.
We have killed a few, but by using tanks.... The Demons... were so powerful.... we couldn't even stop them.... So many People running and screaming.... Bodies every where.... The soldiers were scared.... like the souls were taken out of them, we Held them off as long as we could till we called in napalm..... that didn't work either.... THEY KEPT COMING!!!! We needed heavy weapons... new weapons of some kind.... we... were so scared....... What has happened to cause this.... this once beautiful City to turn into HELL! I... I Must Go and Get away from New York City.....

Sergeant Major Johnson

(only a back Story of what has happened, HELL HAS FROZEN OVER!)

SolidSamurai
04-15-2008, 2:04 PM
So, hellgate new york? Yah, I'll give this a shot. Input shifty ricky pretty please. >_>

Rifleman223
04-15-2008, 2:05 PM
lol still works doesnt it?
its a kickass story..

SolidSamurai
04-15-2008, 2:06 PM
Yah it'd do for a gorey shoot-em-up.

Rifleman223
04-15-2008, 2:09 PM
i was thinking of adding a gorey part.. i mean HUGE... and Alot of Blood... and Gore and SHOOTING.. and Intense BLOWING UP... with Helicopters and Tanks... and Machine guns... AND EVERYTHING ELSE THATS A WEAPON!

DarkMirror
04-15-2008, 3:30 PM
Stop making damn RPs. Please. You need to TOTALLY improbve your actual posts and skills before you make ANY MORE RPs.

kongurous
04-15-2008, 4:16 PM
Stop making damn RPs. Please. You need to TOTALLY improbve your actual posts and skills before you make ANY MORE RPs.

As ironic as this is coming from DM (just playing around, your posts have improved a lot since Day 1), he has a point. Instead of making new roleplays, why don't you first lurk around here to see how we do things, maybe join a few existing games? The last thing this forum needs is a flooded market with cheap goods. I mean no offense but really. Come on. This isn't a quality thread.

Nostradamus
04-15-2008, 4:52 PM
And Kong can we please put a ban on IC and OOC threads. This RP is a prime example. It's not going ANYWHERE, harsh but true. It is quite simply awful the post...

i was thinking of adding a gorey part.. i mean HUGE... and Alot of Blood... and Gore and SHOOTING.. and Intense BLOWING UP... with Helicopters and Tanks... and Machine guns... AND EVERYTHING ELSE THATS A WEAPON!

...is all the evidence I need for this

If enough interest has been generated in the Scratch Pad or the Roleplayers usergroup then IC and OOC threads may be necessary (i.e. for you upcoming RP Kong). But otherwise I think they should be merged/deleted on sight.

SolidSamurai
04-16-2008, 2:02 AM
I'll admit this was a noobish thread and that I was bored at school when I chose to join in on it.

Go ahead and close it.

Rifleman223
04-16-2008, 2:32 PM
yeah i have to admit i wanted to kill someone after this.. what really happened was that i was fuckin Hyper while writing this so i rushed right threw it. This thread has caused people to make fun of me behind my back but, heh i've expressed my anger in worst ways.

DarkMirror
04-16-2008, 2:38 PM
I would note I didn't insult you behind your back. I posted that in a place that you could easily view and discuss my opinion on.

Rifleman223
04-16-2008, 2:44 PM
I'm not talkin about you am i?

DarkMirror
04-16-2008, 2:55 PM
I believe you are, seeing as I'm the one who said you have little to no RP skills.

Rifleman223
04-16-2008, 3:24 PM
im done talkin about you its someone else im about to go yell at

Nostradamus
04-16-2008, 3:54 PM
Yes and it hurt so much. Little Jenny can talk big words, she threw all her dollies out the pram, stood on her two feet, staggered up to me and shit herself before crying and calling me mean. Oh the pain I am feeling right now.

Polkaman
04-16-2008, 9:49 PM
Well this is getting no where. Either continue with the RP or close it.
Dont worry, be happy :P

Rifleman223
04-16-2008, 10:05 PM
1st thing : Close this
2nd Thing: Nostradamus <---- NEEDS TO SHUT THE HELL UP!