My Mp3 (Critque Please)

[TheDriver]

Heh galiant's got one and so do I.
This is a remix of one I made. It was made pretty easily in GarageBand.
Enjoy?
Critque?
Oh and btw dont be an ass and steal my song. I mean come on srsly? :rolleyes:

Edit: For some reason the file wont upload...
Wait a bit has i upload it through a hosting site ....
The Song (http://www.justuploadit.com/files/426/The%20Eight%20O_%20%2880%27%20Revival%20Remix%29.m p3)
~Driver

[Galiant]

OH MAN!!! I wanna soooo hear this song!

[Galiant]

OMFG!!! Wat song is dat?!

[TheDriver]

Is that a yay or a neigh? Its my on song called The Eight 0* thats a remix of a song called 80's revival.

[Moser]

I like it. Makes me want to play Ninja Turtles or something. +rep.

[TheDriver]

Lol thanks man :D.

[Galiant]

Is that a yay or a neigh? Its my on song called The Eight 0* thats a remix of a song called 80's revival.


A YAY!!! Isn't it obvious?

[Thedutchjelle]

@Thedriver
Lol, i recognized the sounds you used. Does that make me a nerd?

It sounds very neet though, but I kinda thought the intro was weird.
There is also a pause of like 4 seconds around 1:50 which is kinda pointless imo.

Around 3:40 all kind of weird sounds start playing which I didn't really like. And again a long pause and stuff. Maybe I just hate long breaks in the mid of a song. The stuff around 4:40 is like completly different than the rest of the song, it just doesn't fit in.

Overall I liked it thought. Listened till the end.

[TheDriver]

Lol i used sounds in garage band XD.
At 4:40 it enter WTF mode :P.
And the song break was intentional for the purpose of dance.

[Thedutchjelle]

Lol i used sounds in garage band XD.
At 4:40 it enter WTF mode :P.
And the song break was intentional for the purpose of dance.


I know you used Garageband xD I use it as well you see.

[Fiendwurm]

I would give you rep if you found, made, or recorded all of the sounds, but you used garage band...which is cheating...

If your wondering how you could improve it I would say, GET RID OF THE WFT MODE, make the song more complex (aka more sounds at once) and make the song sound generaly the same all the way through.

[TheDriver]

I composed this so w/e :P. Not cheating has i compilesd and some sounds were custom As well >_<. Give an aspiring garage bander his due rep
:P.
some
And say you were at a .. lets say rave Than WTF is perfect for dancing if
used correctly.
XD.

[T-Dawg]

WTF mode was my favorite part. Because it was definitely WTF.

[masterofhobbiton]

I composed this so w/e :P. Not cheating has i compilesd and some sounds were custom As well >_<. Give an aspiring garage bander his due rep

The problem is that everything was existing loops stuck together. You didn't actually create notes and things, maybe a tiny bit. So no, it's still cheating. :P

Try actually making notes, making your own version of an existing song is a good place to start, but the point is to get away from using loops and actually make a song.

[TheDriver]

The problem is that everything was existing loops stuck together. You didn't actually create notes and things, maybe a tiny bit. So no, it's still cheating. :P

Try actually making notes, making your own version of an existing song is a good place to start, but the point is to get away from using loops and actually make a song.
no no after about half of the song was created by taking the loops... how to put it... instrument tuning and play around with it for a bit.B But yeah i couldn't make it w/o garage band :P.

[masterofhobbiton]

That wasn't the point; I use garageband too, but I don't use loops at all, but nvm, w/e.

[TheDriver]

WTF mode was my favorite part. Because it was definitely WTF.

AHAHa thanks.