my map

[Ubern00bTerran]

OKAY so i made DOZENS of maps... but this one is still under construction! i just need feedbacks on this map... and I'll do this b myself...

[Egon]

It looks nice, you just need some difference in terrain, doodads, and learn how to make wide bridges/inverted ramps. Even the best had to start out somewhere :p

[Ubern00bTerran]

How da Funk can I make a bridge wider in StarCraft Campaign Editor?

[Thedutchjelle]

Imo those widened bridges and inverted ramps in maps are lame, i applaud/praise everybody who sticks with the default editor ;)

[Death505]

Well i only use those for like rpg/bounds/cool stuff not melee unless like its a tourney require but yea i agree

[matefkr]

Not bad!

You should use ScmDraft2 to make more elaborated terrain (and you can place more doodadds with the usage of that).

[Ubern00bTerran]

Is the map balanced well? if not show me the unbalanced parts

[TitanWing]

It's not too bad, but has some major balance issues.

Stuff to fix:
-Several of the expos have cliffs over them wide enough to land tanks on, this is unfair for Protoss/Zerg.
-Choke points at bottom and Blue's expo are way to small. Bad thing for all races, but especially P and Z.
-Add more variety to your terrain (put crushed rock terrain here and there in the open dirt areas and add in a few more doodads to spicen it up)
-Needs at least 2 more expos, right now resources are really tight. Not gonna be a very fun game if you run out of money at the 15 minute mark. ;)
-Don't put unbuildable doodads in players' bases. It's very annoying.
-Make the mains larger and fill in the holes in Blue's base.

If you want a widened twilight ramp, copy this one:

Credit goes to Starparty of broodwarmaps.net for creating this map.

[Ubern00bTerran]

do you think it's advisable to make the naturals' money 50k? and like make the expos 20k? and i'm thinking of placing a wider ramp... how can i do that?

EDIT:sorry TitanWing ... I thought u said wider bridge... ehehe sorry bout that

[TitanWing]

Don't widen main ramps, it's unfair for Terran who are the weakest race when rushed. Terran need to be able to block their ramps, especially against Protoss.

Don't increase the minerals and gas standard is the best. Just add 2 more into the map.

[Ubern00bTerran]

Ok... here it is.. improved or not?

[TitanWing]

Well, Red can't even walk to his natural and red's side of the map looks 50% bigger, fix that and it should be close to wraps.