Time, Dr. Freeman?

[The_Maker]

Random posting of old work that I was too lazy to post before-ness away!
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/1771/endingox8.jpg

Spoilers btw <_<

C&C plzkthnx.

[WeekendLazyness]

This isn't a screenshot?

[The_Maker]

It's a helluva modified screenshot if that answers your question. =P

[Aquarian]

I originally wanted show my criticism by doing it in-picture to highlight some parts and show what I would like to suggest. But in the end, "Ah, hell this, just write the two main things I wanna point out." went through my head.

First of all, on the left side of the glass ground, it is fine as it is bright, but on the right, it is pretty dark, eventhough the blast's light should also be there as there is nothing interferring with the light-ray.

Alyx's shadow is too dark. Remember, she is standing on a glass surface, therefore, the shadow shouldn't be too dark unless the Citadel below is pitch black.

Second, the explosion doesn't contain that "oshit" feeling. Instead, it looks like an oddly shaped fireball expanding slowly. Maybe apply a stronger, longer and more obvious radial blur and add more flying debris?

It would also look alot more dramatic and give a more chaotic feeling if one of those electric bolts were going towards the screen and viewer. It's also a nice touch. ;)

I have a few more things to say, but can't really put them into words right now. Oh, and before I forget, MOAR GMOD!