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Zeltaris
03-26-2007, 12:48 AM
So, I realised I've been back for around two months now and I haven't posted a single piece of original artwork. Shame on me :rolleyes:
This was supposedly going to be a revival of my old portfolio thread, but I'm sure something that long-dead shouldn't be necroed without staff supervision... you never know, it might turn on you and eat you alive. :P

Anyway, this here is one of my n00bis C4D abstracts. The second I made, actually. I had a nicer looking one, but it got corrupted, so... I had to stick with this one. I know it's not precisely awesome [a tad crappy I might add :O], so I spiffed it up and made it into a wallpaper!

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/1148/renver1ab2.jpg

C&C?
[Expect moar original Zelt art soon :)]

HyperDemonic
03-26-2007, 1:47 AM
well im not a big fan of these but its looks good, but the text has something funny too it,idk...

Aquarian
03-26-2007, 9:01 AM
Well, I find the background more appealing to be honest. Seriously, I think that Copy+ paste render> Color> Make BG> Add lil' touches can be counted as finished work. And the render was also kinda boring. Maybe add some extra effects and play around with the many filters that Photoshop has. Maybe add some fitting objects too.

This (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18523975/?qo=17&q=by%3Afeni-x&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps) is an example which is eye-catching, but (Not too) simple looking.

I'm sorry if it was too harsh. It's been really a long time since I've criticised. But, thank you for posting more work here in the CC. I would too, but my creative juices are dry. :P

Zeltaris
03-26-2007, 2:13 PM
Well, I find the background more appealing to be honest. Seriously, I think that Copy+ paste render> Color> Make BG> Add lil' touches can be counted as finished work. And the render was also kinda boring. Maybe add some extra effects and play around with the many filters that Photoshop has. Maybe add some fitting objects too.


Yeah, I'm aware the render isn't quite the best... :/ I still have a long way ahead of me :D... Although I did try to fix it up a bit giving it a nice frame. Does that count :P?

This (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18523975/?qo=17&q=by%3Afeni-x&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps) is an example which is eye-catching, but (Not too) simple looking.
Holy q00t... that = win. But it totally exceeds my current 3D skills >_>
I'll have to get back to you on that one ;)
I'm sorry if it was too harsh. It's been really a long time since I've criticised. But, thank you for posting more work here in the CC. I would too, but my creative juices are dry. :P
Anything that helps me improve is welcome. I'll be posting more stuff more often. We're bringing this forum back to life, kicking and screaming if we have to ;)

GroG
03-26-2007, 2:20 PM
That's pretty neat, did you make the crystal/glass looking thing yourself? If so, wow..

Zeltaris
03-26-2007, 2:26 PM
That's pretty neat, did you make the crystal/glass looking thing yourself? If so, wow..

Thanks, although to be pretty honest, it's not all that great (it's actually my second render in C4D). Just check the link Aquarian posted... that's the kind of thing that'd make me bow down... if I wasn't so afraid of surprise buttsecks >_>

GroG
03-26-2007, 2:55 PM
Yeah, that link Aquarian posted looks like some giant end boss from a FF game lol ;p. But yeah, I see what you mean.

Aquarian
03-27-2007, 9:29 AM
I did C4D for awhile, but when I moved on to more complex renders, my computer just couldn't handle it. :P

Although I did try to fix it up a bit giving it a nice frame. Does that count :P?

Your frame gets a 10/10. Seriously, I'm not kidding. ;)

Anything that helps me improve is welcome. I'll be posting more stuff more often. We're bringing this forum back to life, kicking and screaming if we have to ;)

I will gladly join, if I have the time. :D

Zeltaris
07-01-2008, 11:28 PM
Holy thread necro on a stick, batman!

I sorta just pulled up photoshop and whipped this up a while ago, to distract myself a bit.
Also, I necroed this thread cos i didn't feel like making a new one and cos I was feeling a bit nostalgic :P
http://www.warboards.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=10535&d=1214969163

so...

C&C?

FrankZ
07-02-2008, 7:41 AM
It's a nice piece of work, actually. But it's the kind of wallpaper that you can easily replace. I mean, at first it's really eye-catching but the next moment it's fazzily boring. And I do think that the elements at the lower-right corner are some kind of weird... good, but weird.

Rating it, I'd give a thumbs up and a 7.5/10 rating.

Please, don't take this harshly. It's just how I see it, really.

~Fz

masterofhobbiton
07-02-2008, 3:38 PM
NECRO! :D

It's cool, yeah. I think the problem with the stuff at the bottom right is that the blood and tools and chart are all lying flat, as if you're looking down at them on a table or something, while the stethoscope is at a weird angle. If you could find a picture of a stethoscope lying flat I think it'd look normal. Oh, and there should be another . after the D in M.D. gj.

Neo
07-05-2008, 1:54 PM
Zelt out of curiosity do you have a Portfolio or anything up online?

-Neo

Vezer
07-05-2008, 11:07 PM
Hey, that looks kinda like Fractal Art...

Do you have a Deviant Art account?