(2)The Fissure

[Harbinger]

Really not much to say about this one; was sitting on the couch, cat in lap, when the idea for this map struck me. For some reason I'm really tired at the moment even though it's only 8:49 pm, so I might've missed something. Tell me if that's the case. I want to make this map better because I feel there hasn't been enough effort in mine lately, they've simply been rolled off the press.

Update #4

[Superiorwolf]

Here's my comments! :D

To fix that part I said about ugly placement you can put some more platform where that space is and then do a regular mineral placement ;)

[Harbinger]

Adjusted the main minerals and got rid of the sub-expos altogether. As for the bridges, I'll fix those later. Not a big fan of square terrain... Need sleep anyways.

[TitanWing]

Allow me to save you the trouble (aka take it upon myself :P).

Here's widened bridges that are about the size of 2 separate ones. Your welcome! :)

[Ahzz]

it looks nice but if its two entrances Terran and Protoss will pwn zerg any day. Maybe not toss, but when not toss, zerg has a very small variety of strategies to use. Terran will pwn zerg any day on this map, unless zerg wastes double money on sunken colonies which wont be succesful further on. Also, terran vs protoss which terran wouldn't do vulture harass and get all your probes from your main. Protoss cant even attack before he has photon cannons or something, since terran can always just run through two ways with vultures and pwn it all.

I dunno if you have already, but try to check quite a bit of pro maps and other common maps, they can be seen from replays too, for instance.

[Harbinger]

Thanks, Titan. Modified your bridges a bit more, and now I think the map's pretty much done. I'm a bit worried about that vult harass thing though... I'll see what I can do.

[TitanWing]

I took the liberty of editing the areas around the bridges.:P Some of the terrrain didn't match and one bridge wasn't properly aligned.

[Harbinger]

Beat ya to it, and your right middle-lower bridge doesn't exist. :P

[TitanWing]

Meh...fine, you win.