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DarkMirror
09-20-2006, 4:37 PM
This thread died, so letys retstart!

It is the year 2540, the day is May 26th, military calendar. The planet is Brivel's Folly, on the edge of human controlled space, and it is in distress.

Brivel's Folly was populated in late 2300s, though it had been previously discovered by a navigator named Thomas Brivel, who crash-landed on the planet and was never heard from again. It was noted for its atmosphere, which was already friendly to human life, and the immense archaeological sites across the planet. Serving as a military outpost and a scientific installation, Brivel's Folly was one of the more important outward stations, if a backwater compared to say, Reach.

What the UNSC didn't know was the artifacts were Forerunner in origin. Despite their best attempts, they could not decipher the writing or the meaning on these objects. Most of the scientific personnel were removed after the war with the Covenant began, and the planet has been quite busy ever since.

The Covenant discovered the planet soon after the humans did, and also noted the Forerunner artifacts, but stayed their ferocity until the order was given. The fleet tasked with this objective, the Fleet of Unconquerable Grace, was headed by an Elite by the name of Kular 'Cyclamee, who has personally killed over 300 humans.

The planet has been under tight lock for a few months now. Every year on Brivel's Folly, there is a strange meteor storm around the time of May. The zenith of this storm is around the end of the month, and it disrupts communication and slipspace travel. Before the storm, however, the defense forces noticed strange slipspace anamolies that were interpreted as Covenant signatures.

In response, two Spartans were sent by the UNSC and as tensions rise, and the meteor shower ends, only time will tell how this conflict will end. Whether it is a victory for the Covenant Empire or the United Nations Space Command is up to you....

The way this RP is conducted will be different from the usual. Instead of having a pre-set winner and loser, the experience will be dynamic. The humans start out with 2 out of 9 regions, and the Covenant start out invading one. The RP can end in the first battle alone. I will judge which side did the best RPing by the end of the fight, and decide the winner. Each player will have a certain amount of available posts and god-modding is STRICTLY PROHIBITED. Btw, here be the map: http://up.kupatrix.org/f/5/halo-rp-map.jpg (http://up.kupatrix.org/f/5/halo-rp-map.jpg)

As far as what players can be, you're free to choose as long as it's reasonable. For example, no Grunts who happen to have a body count larger than my daily calorie intake (which is a few thousand... on a light day). I'd like to see some variety in the characters as well, and you are free to be whatever Covenant race you want... as long as it's available in Halo: Combat Evolved. If you have any questions, feel free to PM either of the GMs.

Here is the character sheet.

Name: (You will not be allowed if we must explain this)
Age: (see above)
Gender: (see above. Only applies to humans.)
Race: (not a marathon)
Rank: (be reasonable)
Weapon(s): (again, be reasonable)
Description: (eye color, height, weight, interesting features, etc.)
Bio: (a good two paragraphs will suffice)



Grunts - Unggoy

Orange Armor - Grunt Minor
Red Armor – Grunt Major
Green Armor – Grunt Heavy Weapons Specialist
Black Armor – Grunt Special Operations
White Armor – Grunt Engineer and Special Operations Commando Drones - Yanme'e

Green Exoskeleton - Drone Minor
Blue Exoskeleton - Drone Major Jackals - Kig-Yar

Blue Shield – Jackal Minor
Orange Shield – Jackal Major
No Shield – Jackal Sniper Hunters - Lekgolo

No Known Ranking System Engineers - Huragok

No Known Ranking System Brutes - Jiralhanae

Brute without Helmet – Brute Minor
Brute with Helmet – Brute Major
Brute with Helmet and Flag – Brute Captain
Brute with Honor Guard Helmet – Brute Honor Guard
Brute with Honor Guard Helmet and Flag – Brute Honor Guard Captain
Brute with Fist of Rukt Hammer – Brute Chieftain Elites - Sangheili

Blue Armor – Elite Minor
Red Armor – Elite Major
Cyan Armor with Jetpack – Elite Ranger
Chrome Armor - Elite Stealth Commando/Osoona (Halo: CE)
Gray/Brown Armor - Elite Stealth Commando/Osoona (Halo 2)
Black Armor - Elite Special Operations Commando (Halo:CE)
Violet Armor – Elite Special Operations (Halo 2)
White Armor – Elite Ultra
Gold Armor – Field Master/Ship Master/Fleet Master/Zealot
Crimson Ornate Armor – Elite Honor Guard
White Ornate Armor – Elite Ultra Honor Guard
White Ornate Armor with Ornate Headpiece – Elite Honor Guard Supreme Commander
Violet Armor and Cloak – Supreme Commander [1] (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Covenant_%28Halo%29#_note-0#_note-0)
White Armor with Ornate Headpiece – Elite Councilor
Gray Ornate Armor – Arbiter
Prophets

Minor Prophet/Legate - Minor Prophets command ships and conduct research on Forerunner technology and artifacts. It is presumed that they command the Engineers.
Prophet Councilor - Prophet Councilors sit on the Council of Concordance and speak on behalf of the Prophets and the religious interests of the Covenant.
Prophet Hierarch - Three Prophet Hierarchs assume total control over the Covenant.
Prophet of Truth - Hierarch of the Covenant
Prophet of Mercy - Hierarch of the Covenant
Prophet of Regret - Hierarch of the Covenant
Oh, and I coppyed this striaght from the orignle and Wiki, so lets get this started!

Giggilyomeromicon
09-20-2006, 5:00 PM
. . . . did you even ask before you made this?

DarkMirror
09-20-2006, 5:03 PM
why would that be revelent?

Giggilyomeromicon
09-20-2006, 5:07 PM
why would that be revelent?

Let's see here, oh, a little world called "plagerism" which just happens to be, and I read this from the dictionary, "the act of appropriating the literary composition of another author, or excerpts, ideas, or passages therefrom, and passing the material off as one's own creation."

Nowhere in your post did you cite either kongurous or Spartan. It also appears that you failed to even ASK them if you could re post THEIR work. That's why it's relevant.

You also got the name of the RP wrong.

DarkMirror
09-20-2006, 5:09 PM
go away.

Giggilyomeromicon
09-20-2006, 5:11 PM
go away.

Ok, I'll just inform kongurous about this.

Dusty
09-20-2006, 5:54 PM
I smell a jacking and flamefest comeing......

Vhaeraun
09-20-2006, 6:10 PM
To be honest, I'm slightly amazed by the seeming complexity of this story. Seeing as I never saw the first one (Or did, and didn't read it considering it most likely had Halo in the name xD) I may be interested in signing up. I wanna see how things work out for me before I get wrapped up in this though.

And Giggily, shut it. Seems to me that if kong had a problem he'd have said something himself. Unless of course he didn't see the thread, which seems unlikely, but meh.


(NOTE: Do realise this is one of the only times you'll see me defending an RP by someone I don't recall seeing around before, and a Halo RP at that. As such, please take the time to take note of this post, cause you'll probably never see another like it from me for a very long time xD)

kongurous
09-20-2006, 6:44 PM
http://www.warboards.org/showthread.php?t=18890

Heya bitch. Don't steal my story. You should done two things.

1) Asked before making this. I wrote the story, I made the map.

2) Spelled the title correctly. It's Brivel's Folly, not Brievel Folly.

Dusty
09-20-2006, 7:48 PM
http://www.warboards.org/showthread.php?t=18890

Heya bitch. Don't steal my story. You should done two things.

1) Asked before making this. I wrote the story, I made the map.

2) Spelled the title correctly. It's Brivel's Folly, not Brievel Folly.

Yep I knew It. Have fun dark, I'm out :cool:

Vhaeraun
09-20-2006, 8:28 PM
So the latter comment by me was oddly correct >.>

DarkMirror
09-20-2006, 9:07 PM
fuck you all.

Biohazard
09-20-2006, 9:21 PM
You're just upset because my crazy mad RP skillz + Kong's unending creative genius pwns you...so stop with the vulgarity because it truly isnt necessary...

kongurous
09-20-2006, 9:31 PM
fuck you all.

Don't steal my work. What I write and what I post is not open to be taken and posted by others. Brivel's Folly is intellectual property of Spartan-II and I, and we could easily sue you over copyright infringement right now if we so desired (and we won't). Next time you wish to RP, please come up with your own. Next time you want to use a story written by me, you ask me for permission first.

Ender
09-20-2006, 9:48 PM
That's enough.

Plagarism is a no-no.

Instead of bitching, everyone, try reporting the post.

Nickodemus
09-20-2006, 10:47 PM
LOL, shirley you would have had to filed copyright and patent notices with the govermental agencies for that case to be valid...

BUT,

Suffice to say. The unwriten rules on this are.

BACK THE HECK OFF AND DON"T STEAL OTHER PEOPLES SHIT> THAT DOES NOTHING BUT PISS PEOPLE OFF!!! WE ALL HAVE OUR OWN PROPERTIES THAT WE DO.

So don't steal them...


And yes Shirley, I was just messin'

Seriously come up with an original story.. Is it that hard to wrap your brain around?

Ender
09-20-2006, 11:29 PM
Closed.