No. 2

[LXM-Designs]

Here is the one I was working on...
I'd like to have at least a little ammount of C&C on it ;)
Or at least tell me if it's better than the previous one...


http://members.chello.nl/j.cuijpers3/misc/artwork_3.jpg

[Mtank]

looks good, but theres something missing....I think you need to make it darker and add some more twirly pipes around it..what did ya use to make this?

edit: sorry, looked again, it looks like a toy...make it a bit sharper...more edges, with the smooth thing in the middle.

[LXM-Designs]

More edges? What do you exactly mean?

I used cinema 4d for the render and PhotoShop for the rest.

[mcflurry_1982]

Luuk you seem to like to put your light on the left side. I would say to experiment with the lighting. in all of my 3d mork i always experiment with that to see what effect that will have and if it will enhance it.

[LXM-Designs]

Well I've tried some others, and I thought this looked best. But I'll try to experiment more. :)

[Mtank]

with edges I meant, Its too damn light and smooth...make it sharper; blades...and stuff like that...spikes.

[LXM-Designs]

Oh.. Well, in the previous one I used edges and spikey stuff, so now I used the smoooth effect ^^