Good plot or Not?

[Dusty]

This was a plot idea i had for a fanfic on SC its a bit wacked itinvolves werewolfs here is a basic overview:A UED officer is on patrol on in a Nature reserve area looking for poachers. He and his mem are attacked by half wolf half human cretures and he is the only one that survives. He is trated by a medic ten shipe to shakuras to advise Raynor and the protoss.Well one night he transforms and starts andimonium. Raynor goes in to fiqured out whats going on. He gets his butt kicked and was nearly killed but a few protoss came in.Due to the diffrent moon patterns on Shakuras he can't become human again unless he is cured. So Raynor the protoss and the UED wat to cure him while also running test to see what happen.They find a cure but it also seems Duran has taken intrest i the officer. and so there are lots of skirmishes and fight scenes until finally they find the Officer Raynor, Zery, and Artanis try to capture him. Raynor gets a slash in the face. Zeratul is bitten (protoss are imune to lyca) and Artanis gets knoked over a cliff (he lives).They manage to cure him put they don't that duran has a sample of the officers blood. Or his evil intent...I want to right about a good story to this but i want to know if anyone is intrested in this plot first.

[Kazansky]

I'm going to give you a very painful criticism:

You suck. That's all I can say. I mean, it's too strange, too plotless. Too goddamn predictable. I can write better crap than this, sorry to say, but that's what I think.

[GenocideAlive]

Your idea isn't bad, but it's been done a thousand times over. On top of that, there are plenty of things that you can do involving the SC universe that don't need crossovers with other fictions. For instance, if you were to go with Highlander, then add in vampires, and throw in some demons, it'd be too convoluted, and too hard to focus on any particular storyline or plot.

You gotta keep it simple.

[xodkrm]

Its alright...just needs new words, new plot, new characters, new theme, and a new title.
Everything else is A+!
GOOD WORK!

[Leosam096]

sounds wacked...but a good summary.a nice try though.

cheers!

[EvilEggCracker]

Sounds pretty...crap. It just reeks of well...crapiness. The way youve typed up the summary makes it all the more crappier as well.

[sololop]

It's OK.. you better be sure to double check your spelling, though. That is my biggest turn off, spelling errors.

[Sikawtic]

I'm sure the werewolf virus got onto other planets... its so hard to detect.

[Dusty]

Its a virus? that would be almost funny a infected lig turning i front of a Marine him start freaking out...

[Uuugggg]

Its a virus? that would be almost funny a infected lig turning i front of a Marine him start freaking out...

Thanks for the laugh.

[Chuckles]

It seems that everything is a bit too obvious. In my opinion, a story like this would exciting for the fear and suspense involved rather than people trying to navigate the complications of getting a cure. That has been done far too many times. Try and think of a plot with more originality. Most readers would probably know where this one was going early on.

Good luck.

[Velex]

Sorry But holy crap thats a realy bad plot. Try somthing new or atleast somthing that seems more futuristic. Make it the zergling virus or somthing...