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Duddits
04-03-2004, 8:33 PM
EDIT!! WOOT!! 1,000 POSTS!!!


Well, I've wrote out many poems over the past years, yet so few have been recorded on the computer. Here are thoses few.

Insomnia
Sleep
doesn't come
easy
for me; at all
is not easy
at
all

Dreams
horrid; vivid
my dreams keep
me awake
all
night

I don't sleep
I can't sleep
sleep
I don’t
I won't

Yet I must!
I must
sleep!
sleep

Dreamt, I did
that I
slept
all
night; peacefully
just a dream

Out of the depths
of hell,
however,
nightmares crept
through

Fire!
Misery!
Death!
Pain!

I need sleep
or I
will
be driven
insane

Insane!
Ha ha!
I would came ME insane?!

Nobody will listen
I will sleep

---

Lost or deilrious

The needles in my mind
The sorrow in my soul
The horror of my life
The substance I abuse
The heart dark as coal
The lung stabbed by your knife

I feel so lost
Yet this anger within me
Overwhelms me
I feel so delirious
Yet my mind is so clear
So clear

This power shall be
Harnesses
Refer to me as the
Embodiment of
Hatred

The needles in my mind
The sorrow in my soul
The horror of my life
The substance I abuse
The heart dark as coal
The lung stabbed by your knife

You feel so lost
You feel so delirious

---

Freezing

Cold
I am so
cold
It is just
overwhelming
it is

I have never been
so cold
Dear God
the pain

My bones
so brittle and fragile
snap
like twigs
in this cold
hell

Why?
Why am
I
so
damn
cold

Why?

---

Hypocrite

Say one thing
Then do another
Stab me in the back
I was like your own brotha
Still you turned around and lied to me
Then cried to me
Stop dying on me!
brotha

---

Wasted

Legs are liquid
Like walking on water
Face is numb
My minds is a spin
I'm wasted man
Don't think I won't do it again

Fell out of bed
Puked on the floor
Walked in the kitchen
Drank a few more
Now my stomach's burnin
And I'm such a mess
I'm wasted man
Know that you're talkin to the best

---

Eternity

I suffer
every day
every minute
every second
every moment of
my
life

Will it end
please make
it
stop
God please
I can't take much more

I hate waiting
hurry up
the end is
near
close
so close
a finer moment of life

Here it comes
now
it's almost over
thank you
Lord thank you

It's over
*gunshot*

---

HATE

Your old friend is near
He is the gun in your hand
He is the fire in your gut
He was the bullet that killed your dad

Your old friend is close
He is the needle in your arm
He is the poison in your veins
He was the stroke that fried your brain

Your old friend is gone
No
He is still there
Cold as ever
Hot as always

Hate is not his name
His name is
Murder
Genocide
Prejudice
Torture
Poverty
Suicide
His name is not important

He is the destroyer of worlds
He is the creator of chaos
He is immortal
Hate is He
Evil is Hate

I am Hate
I am Him
I am very real
Very Evil
Very close

Say hi
I'm your new friend

---

Sanity

What a precious gift
Sanity is
Those fortunate few have it

I am not fortunate

---

I

I am I
Me to you is you to me
What is yours
Is what is mine
What am I?

I am you
When you look in a mirror
I'm there.

You are me
When I watch rippling waves
You are there

You're always there for me
As I am there for you
You can rely on me

Why?
I was there when you ate your first hotdog
You where there when I lost my first tooth

Where are you?
One is never sure until one sees for oneself

I am I
Me and you
Together
Always

---

No Bars Hold

Get out of my way
I'm pissed off
I'm infuriated

This time won't be like the rest
You'll learn
This time you see me
Angry

I'm mad
I'm ticked
Get out of my way

---

Anonymity

Nameless is what I am
Nameless is what I am

What the hell am I?

SightlessS
Soundless

Snickering
Sneering

---

Sin & Gin

One! Two!
the sin hath been done
Three! Four!
reaper’s web seen spun
Five! Six!
oh this should be fun
Seven! Eight!
just thrown out your gun
Nine! Ten! you crazy fuck
you killed a nun!

---

Fish

I saw you trudgin down the hall
Spittin and drinken down at the mall
Smokin and tokin with all of them all
Laughed when you made J.T. fall
Not smiling now I made the call
Said you are a fuckin fairy
A fish out of water, you fucking fairy
Just like all of them all

---

Pysco So Fun!

A ha ha
Knife!
Through your head
A ha ha ha ha
Visions!
Just began
A ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Lookin!
Into the barrle of your gun
A HA HA! HA HA HA! HA HA HA HA!
Bullet!
Took out your eye
And!
Splattered brain on the wall

---

Spiderwebbed Blades

Sickles of shiny
cold cold metal
gleaming; screaming
stained with blood
tainted by glory
tempered with honor
that's its story

---

Trapped

Not much room
Confined myself
Absorbed by wonder

(suffocating)

Consumed in a pit of anger
Naughty though storm my brain

(sweetly vivid)

Consciousness flows freely
Down the drain
I'm so trapped

(yes)

Battlecruiser
04-03-2004, 8:59 PM
I like the poem hate.

Mordecai2k
04-04-2004, 12:45 AM
i don't like poetry.

edit: ok whatever, gj duddits.

madman5
04-14-2004, 11:23 PM
:2cents:Sometimes people can be really stupid and do stupid things, but then all of a sudden do some little thing that tells us an important thing about life and how it really is just hell waiting to be unleashed to consume us all.:2cents:

Yeah i kno it makes like no sence but i thought it would......o well!

Whiteknight
04-14-2004, 11:33 PM
Madman, a thing you do not do is bump threads (revive dead threads) This was obviously dead (more than 10 days =\), so please don't do that again.