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Wish
03-25-2004, 9:28 PM
Ok, I'm going to post all the lyrics I write here. I want feedback/praise/criticism/whatever. Tell me if I suck, tell me if you like it, send me money if you want :). Ok, here's the first one. It's called "Never Let Go" (cheeze-o-meter is going crazy) and I wrote it when all my friends were beign stupid to each other. I'm picturing as done on an acoustic guitar, a la Dashboard Confessional. Also keep in mind that this was my first attempt at creative writing outside of school. So if that makes you more lenient in your criticism, then yay.

"Never Let Go"
Friends for the good times and friends for the bad
A friend to cry with--to listen and hold
Find somebody who loves you for you
And hold on with both hands and never let go

This is it, so make it count
Late nights and later mornings
With the ones that you love most
Nothing can replace the memories of tonight
So grab them tight and never let go.

Time goes on and people change
People move on and people move out
Your friends of today will be with you forever
Nothing can break what we create now

Friends for the good times and friends for the bad
A friend to cry with--to listen and hold
Find somebody who loves you for you
And hold on with both hands and never let go

Get past your problems
Your petty little fights
Don't destroy now
What you'll spend a lifetime regretting.

Friends for the good times and friends for the bad
A friend to cry with--to listen and hold
Find somebody who loves you for you
And hold on with both hands and never let go

And hold on with both hands and never let go...
Modred
03-25-2004, 10:33 PM
A little cheesy, but a good message overall. Although it seems to deal with an overdone topic of typical attitude.

Sorry, no money for this one. :p
Dark_Soul74
03-25-2004, 10:43 PM
I really can't judge lyrics without the music.
Mordecai2k
03-26-2004, 2:34 AM
i see metra
Wish
03-26-2004, 6:57 AM
Yeah I agree that it was incredibly cheesy. But I'm pretty sure that playing that song on an acoustic guitar will definitely result in some serious attention from my female friends. Not that I need it, but it's good to know that I can pull this one out of the bag :)
LXM-Designs
03-26-2004, 9:35 AM
Why don't you sing it and attach the .mp3 here? :P
Wish
03-26-2004, 9:40 AM
Why don't you sing it and attach the .mp3 here? :P

Once I write some music to go with it and have means of recording it, I will.
LXM-Designs
03-26-2004, 2:40 PM
Neat, looking forward to it :)
Battlecruiser
03-31-2004, 10:21 PM
Why don't you sing it and attach the .mp3 here? :P
you can't attach in this thread.
Mordecai2k
03-31-2004, 11:14 PM
you can't attach in this thread.

you're one of those people who don't read everyone else's post first, eh? Hehe, me too :)